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2. 11/04/12, 01:14 am
Says: "I think this is a great essay, but I don't think the focus is video editing, which is fine. Maybe you would like to change the snapshot title to something more along the lines of creativity or design, digital media. I think the first paragraph is very important, but doesn't relate to your topic. Again, this would work if the topic was collaborations and creativity or something like that.
Also, I really like the use of the video because, not only does it show off your editing skills, it also shows that you took the initiative to create this video which also showcases your internship. Great pick."
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1. 11/03/12, 09:27 pm
Says: "Dannia
Capacities: Risk-taking, creativity, open minded
This is a great story of your wilingness to learn as you go along and having the courage to seek the help of others to accomplish your goals. It also shows your eagerness to learn new skills in and out of the academic setting.
There are a couple of sentences that need review in terms of using the correct verb conjugation or replacing other words, but it is nothing major.
Once you upload the video and fix the sentences I think it will be great! "
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